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a small adventure - gabriel alves
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Name:a small adventure
Submitted by:gabriel alves
Author(s):gabriel alves
Length:6 levels
Demo:Yes
Description:My first hack

IPS Link

Removal Reason(s):
First of all, your hack has the "bad checksum" thing on Snes9x (aka "BAD ROM" in ZSNES), although it doesn't affect much the ROM, but it's still an issue to fix.


All the moves in your title screen are the same as the SMW, I think you should record new moves or disable them, because they're looking really strange. As for your intro screen, it's not mandatory to change (maybe), but it's really blank. Your hack could be better with a storyline, just saying.


The overworld has a lot of errors of perspective and isn't really well done, not to mention Mario can walk on the water... unless he's Jesus, but it's not the case here.


No offense, but I never played a maze too boring like this one. It's all straight, nothing special, you definitely can do something better than this, I even used the "Turbo mode" thing to beat this level faster.

  • Level design is really boring and the fish generator makes the level kinda hard at some parts.
  • The midway point is really weird, not to mention when do we activate the P-Switch it turns into a coin, maybe because you're using the "used block" graphics for this.
  • Vertical scrolling + Tide layer 3 = Bad

I got a "Estou de férias ... Eu acho que você vai ter que enfrentar o Bowser sozinho" when translating it back, just saying but google translate is a bitch at translating phrases like that, you could ask a brazilian member (or maybe staff) more fluent in english to proofread it for you.


Kinda trollish platforms, mainly the platforms in the first two screenshots, they start kinda fast and without attention you won't get ride on them.


Weird usage of tiles for the midway point, making an weird impression of a cutoff. The water palette in the second screen is very weird.


Wrong camera usage, set "Vertical Scroll at Will" instead "No Vertical Scroll unless Flying/Climbing/Etc" and it'll work much better.


This level hasn't been well done, there are repetitive and linear parts, I don't know if it was lack of inspiration or something, but it could be much better done.


And that's how we finish the hack, going to elsewhere in a straight route... walking on the water like Jesus. I really find it strange, is it related to this question you had in portuguese subforum some time ago? Maybe.

You really need to work more on your hack, try hiring testers, read APPALLED to see more about level design, it'll help you a lot because as far I played your hack, the level design isn't near of great. Play our recent accepted hacks and to be sure to read the hack submission guidelines, it'll help you a lot. Feel free to submit your hack again once what I mentioned be fixed, that's all.
Essa hack foi convertida para ips usando o "flips" floating ips
o floating ips deixou a rom corrompida como você pode ver nessa imagem




o resto eu vou corrigir.#smw{:peace:}

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layout by gabriel alves




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Originally posted by gabriel alves
Essa hack foi convertida para ips usando o "flips" floating ips
o floating ips deixou a rom corrompida como você pode ver nessa imagem
*img*

o resto eu vou corrigir.#smw{:peace:}

Ehhhhh... What?

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Okay, my layout looks ugly.
He's speaking in Portuguese. Nothing wrong with that because SP speaks that too.

Gabriel: tem certeza que isso só acontece quando você transforma a ROM e patch? Se o problema estiver no FLIPS, tenta mudar o número do evento, ou então a posição dos paths/levels no OW.
Originally posted by Koopster
He's speaking in Portuguese. Nothing wrong with that because SP speaks that too.

I've seen it. I don't understand Portuguese (only German [whoooh], Englsh [why don't #ab{;)} ], Polish [my mum and my dad] and a bit French [I want to learn it]), so I need a translation.

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Okay, my layout looks ugly.
I use Google Translate; yeah it is inaccurate when translating to other languages but translating to English is easy, all you do is make ot the errors it gives you and there is your translation.
Originally posted by MarioFanGamer659
so I need a translation

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This hack has been converted to IPS using "flips" floating ips
The floating ips make the rom corrupt as you can see in this image
*img*

The rest I'll fix.#smw{:peace:}

Enough, now stop with the off-topic. This is a hack removal log and not a thread of discussion about languages.


The pipe pices aren't looking nice.

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Okay, my layout looks ugly.
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Vertical scrolling + Tide layer 3 = Bad

It isn't actually bad if done well (i.e a level revolving around dolphins and you want it to be vertical, sorta like Rising Tide Ride from Rise to the Challenge).
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gabriel, acho que você devia substituir essa mensagem por:
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I'm on vacation.
I think you might have to face Bowser alone.
-Yoshi

Só dando uma sugestão.
For the intro, just replace the background and put a handrail on that bridge. Simple enough.

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Let's milk Sunny Milk. Then she'll have enough money to fund Sunny Milk Real Estate.
Everypony's digging with a shovel
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Vertical scrolling + Tide layer 3 = Bad


I'm pretty sure that there's a fix for this, though. (it's in the sprites section iirc)
Originally posted by Purple Rex
I'm pretty sure that there's a fix for this, though. (it's in the sprites section iirc)

Yup.
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