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super mario world - revenge on the mountains! (canceled)

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Also, The level names should at least have Capitals.
Agreed. But I am a nitpicker like that.#smw{._.}
Your first level feels good level design-wise, but that palette really doesn't fit, firstly because it doesn't fit to what the overworld shows, secondly because red isn't a good color for grass at all. But besides being a bit too hard for a first level, I enjoyed that one.

In the second level, I counted 6 yoshi coins, not sure if that was caused because of a buggy one or if that's actually that there's one more than there should be, but you should look into it. That level was also quite decent and the development of the sumo brothers gimmick was nice (though probably having a final sumo brothers challenge or something like that in the end of the level would be cool).

The third level's palette just... Needs a change. Black outlines, dark dots and white everywhere else doesn't fit. The level itself felt a bit too short, and by the way I'm not sure if I'm missing something, but I was able to spot only three yoshi coins there.

The lakitu level has one yoshi coin in a screen boundary (press F2 and you'll find it, it's either the first or the second one). That level, too, felt too short. Considering it's the fourth level, it should probably be a bit longer than the previous levels.

The castle was probably the shortest level though. That plant that comes out of the pipe in the first part gets stuck in the ceiling, so you should either lower it a bit or just remove it. I also found some sprite memory issues. Also that bush near the red door, uh, well, a bush in a castle?


Two more things I'd like to note:

>Check your OW events: they're not edited, but the overworld, even if partially, is, and some events will create cutoff. Just play through your levels and you'll find them (by the way, adding decorations in a overworld is the same as blatantly editing a level; it would be still better to edit the physics of the map);

>Make sure that you use proper capitalization not only in the level names like Aki said, but in all kinds of messages in the game. Helps giving your hack a more clean and professional feel.


Your hack is far from being one of the worst, it just needs a bunch of improvement. I'm sure you can make it better!
It's easily the best thing I've done
So why the empty numb?
I could help you with the palettes, Just PM me.
Hello! I'm here to give a review:

You have provided a challenge that is fun, yet intriguing. You use actual difficulty as opposed to puzzles and fake difficulty. I hope you give a reasonable difficulty curve.

However:

Turn block spam, and cement block spam. This can easily be remedied, also what is the point of the turn block wall to the right?

Minor error, Yoshi Coin on screen boundary.

Funky palate, could you change it so that it is fitting to the inside?

Unedited message.

Level 4's event is the original's.

This was still fun to play, though. keep up the good work! #smw{:TUP:}
i have fixed all the things Koopster and MercuryPenny said, the new version should be here soon.
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I decided to test this hack, it would be done by tomorrow/today.

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link to the new .ips patch. i have fixed major errors and did a few more levels.

warning: don't play after cave of darkness (donut plains 2) and magical waters (donut secret 1).

any constructive criticism is always welcome! if a glitch still hasn't been fixed, i'm currently fixing them.
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Originally posted by MercuryPenny
Funky palate, could you change it so that it is fitting to the inside?


He will have to change it unless the palette from the castle's outside isn't the same as the palette from the inside.
Why don't you create a new ow? It looks like a minor edit of the original.

review: 13/20 not bad not good

edit: this is morton's birthday. both you and koopster has built morton's castle.
(bumpity bump)

anyways, some people might have guessed it; after month of me ignoring my hack just sitting on my computer, i have now finished and completed super mario world - the secret of the lands! and i am now remaking super mario world - revenge on the mountains. overworlds, overworld palettes, some levels, addition of levels, all will change. some levels that i would believe are good will stay on the hack and the levels that i believe drag on will get deleted and will be renewed.

screenies of the 2 current overworlds; yoshi's island (starting point) and the forest of illusion (2nd overworld on the hack):



here are 3 screens of some of the new palettes:


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wow, mario and luigi! you're really good in ow making! well, about the screenshots, i have nothing to say, but the title screen's ledge dirt is too pale(or that's just me #smw{:peace:})

edit:

the boo sprite near the ghost house must be moved one two space to the left.

continue making hacks like this, and i'm sure you'll get member of the month.
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Your OWs are pretty good, but they are a bit simple and blocky.. THe palettes also are ok, but try to use the same (at least near) colors in the levels.

example:

Let's say you have a lava world. And you put there a green, grassland level. Doesn't make sense, right?

(your palettes are weird. they dont look bad but they dont fit ow. you can use more palettes and more islands, maybe that would be good. I mean, make 2 islands, one of them is purple, the other one is green. put the levels with purple in the purple island and stuff stuff stuff..)
Although your overworld seems squarish, it looks much better than your other hack. Try varying the edges a bit more. I cannot judge your levels though it would be advisable to take information from your (at the time of writing) pending hack thread is it will allow you to avoid making mistakes in your level design for the future.
thanks suckhacker, S.R.H., and Everest; i will take it into consideration.

meanwhile, i've been working on some more palettes and here's the vanilla dome submap:




more palettes (some edited/changed):


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"Resolved financial/personal problems equal greater growth!"

"The only constant thing in life is change; nothing is set in stone. The old is replaced with the new. Forgive yourself for past mistakes. When many different problems in your life are resolved (personal, financial, etc.), newfound strength and confidence is gained in the process. Usually, failures, lack of assertiveness, disappointments, incompetence, low self-esteem and lack of self-respect, financial struggles, and setbacks can cause us to change and take action to solve any problem, leading to increased strength and confidence. This you learn from experience.

I have been experiencing this aforementioned newfound strength and confidence myself for the past FOUR to EIGHT years or so, getting stronger with each passing year, learning with each mistake I make and becoming more joyful in the process. Because of this newfound confidence I've acquired over the years, finding my passion is of utmost importance in 2022! You can develop this strength and confidence in yourself as well!"


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Your palettes are nice, but I've a feeling the Vanilla Dome OW has a pretty weird perspective... maybe that's just me.
thanks again, Wormer21. about the vanilla dome submap, which part do you mean that looks a little off?

thanks for the palette information, as always.
My Inspiring Quotes on Personal Growth and Change:

"Resolved financial/personal problems equal greater growth!"

"The only constant thing in life is change; nothing is set in stone. The old is replaced with the new. Forgive yourself for past mistakes. When many different problems in your life are resolved (personal, financial, etc.), newfound strength and confidence is gained in the process. Usually, failures, lack of assertiveness, disappointments, incompetence, low self-esteem and lack of self-respect, financial struggles, and setbacks can cause us to change and take action to solve any problem, leading to increased strength and confidence. This you learn from experience.

I have been experiencing this aforementioned newfound strength and confidence myself for the past FOUR to EIGHT years or so, getting stronger with each passing year, learning with each mistake I make and becoming more joyful in the process. Because of this newfound confidence I've acquired over the years, finding my passion is of utmost importance in 2022! You can develop this strength and confidence in yourself as well!"


To whoever's reading this, you are amazing and you are capable of doing equally amazing things. Gather confidence and be yourself! Say goodbye to the old you and welcome the new you! It wants to arise every moment, but you don't let it. Learn from your mistakes and never make that mistake again! Find your passion and live it!"

Finding my passion in life, but I may still be active on SMWCentral from time to time. Still enjoy playing many hacks, but I'm widening my perspective on life and opening myself to the new.
He's probably talking about that narrow strip of land running through the middle of it. It does look a bit odd to me too, but it's nothing too major.
ok, i'll try to fix it. thanks Wuthering and Wormer21.

god, now that i think: my overworlds each only have 3-5 levels, which is way too small, so what i'm going to do is make an overworld map with approximately 20-35 levels.

this is going to be tedious...
My Inspiring Quotes on Personal Growth and Change:

"Resolved financial/personal problems equal greater growth!"

"The only constant thing in life is change; nothing is set in stone. The old is replaced with the new. Forgive yourself for past mistakes. When many different problems in your life are resolved (personal, financial, etc.), newfound strength and confidence is gained in the process. Usually, failures, lack of assertiveness, disappointments, incompetence, low self-esteem and lack of self-respect, financial struggles, and setbacks can cause us to change and take action to solve any problem, leading to increased strength and confidence. This you learn from experience.

I have been experiencing this aforementioned newfound strength and confidence myself for the past FOUR to EIGHT years or so, getting stronger with each passing year, learning with each mistake I make and becoming more joyful in the process. Because of this newfound confidence I've acquired over the years, finding my passion is of utmost importance in 2022! You can develop this strength and confidence in yourself as well!"


To whoever's reading this, you are amazing and you are capable of doing equally amazing things. Gather confidence and be yourself! Say goodbye to the old you and welcome the new you! It wants to arise every moment, but you don't let it. Learn from your mistakes and never make that mistake again! Find your passion and live it!"

Finding my passion in life, but I may still be active on SMWCentral from time to time. Still enjoy playing many hacks, but I'm widening my perspective on life and opening myself to the new.

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