Passage to the Moon - tjdtnsu

Hack Name: Passage to the Moon
Creator: tjdtnsu
Verdict: Denied
IPS: IPS

Reasons To Deny:
- The first level is actually good for the most part (minus the midpoint not being available) but the second level needs some work.
- Add midpoints to your levels.
- The hack is too short -- 5 levels or 10 minutes of gameplay.

Notes:
- The text is not even together use "-" broken up by syllables if the words are too long.



- This jump is impossible to see what is coming up ahead in Stage 1.



- Too many of these Turn Block, Big Discrimination Mario, situations in this level.



- How exactly is Cape Mario supposed to get through this? Cape Mario flips any block that surrounds him so there's no way for him to actually get by without getting hurt first and then trying it out?

There's also a weirdly used corner tile under the slope. It's very minor but it still creates little cutoff. You can simply fix it by expanding the ground by one block or by moving the slope one tile to the left.

Alternatively you could use Map16 to place the correct tile over the one with cutoff. The cutoff is most likely caused by the right-most, bottom row tile of the elevated slope being under the corner.

also, "He" shouldn't be capitalized because it isn't in the beginning of a sentence. also, last sentence is iffy.

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