Mario vs. Bowser and Mighty No. 9 MKII (Read the first post, thank you) - Full Hack Releases

Originally posted by Roberto zampari

Nothing really wrong with it grammatically. It's a bit incoherent, though. Not much of an porblem and you shouldn't need to change it.

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"You're the first human to arrive in this world" It sounds a little awkward, though. Maybe you can just change the last bit to the first person to arrive here.

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It would sound better as "Hey you, plummer! Could you help me out with this here egg I found?"

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"Here's an interesting fact about the Red Yoshi: When it inhales a shell of any kind, it will spit it out as fire"

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It's okay use the elevator and black and yellow line in a grassland level?

I see nothing wrong with it.

Yoshiatom's Post

As I promised, more flaws I found:

There's a door to the boss at the very start of the level.

I find the floating spoons and floating Penguin bars odd.

I SERIOUSLY hope this isn't the final sprite for the boss. Please replace this sprite when you can.

Not sure if this can be fixed, but you can't enter the door if you're in the middle of it.

The log falls too fast.

You should have a message block tell you that you can fall though the blue ropes if you press down.

Layout by Koopster!
Same goes for titles, don't try abusing loopholes!

<DeputyBS> I knew it
<DeputyBS> alcarobot is taking over the world through his truck dealership franchise

This thread is still alive? Anyway, keep it up and don't let it die again!

Let's hope this won't end as failure. You can make good hacks Roberto, just be patient and everything will be alright.
I'll wait for a newer release, since some people played the other releases and made their feedback.

Bye.

This looks very promising! I like that it's not the same ol' "Bowser does X, Mario Come save Peach from blah" like most other Mario hacks.

Keep it up!

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Originally posted by yoshiatom

Not sure if this can be fixed, but you can't enter the door if you're in the middle of it.

Actually this can be fixed. Just use the huge boss door instead of the normal door.

New level:
Methone energy

The start of this level

I try to convert the Nyololin to Sniper Joe, however, look the result above. The graphics is okay, but i don't know what's going on.

rideable badniks

Gramatical correction?

Could you find the secret passage to access the ON/OFF switch

OMG 1

OMG 2

OMG 3

However, i want to say something: I'M NOT SKILLED TO MAKE CUSTOM BOSSES.
I need someone to help in my stuff, such as custom bosses. If anyone have interest, please reply here or send a PM to me.

The Boss of 2-Castle is Sparkman.
Click here for see the graphics or claim the boss.

And the base rom is here:

WEEK VERSION.

Originally posted by Roberto Zampari

Gramatical correction?

See if this will help you:

"These red lasers can kill you instantly, except if you find a switch somewhere."

If I'm wrong, sorry.

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Can you find the secret passage?

I think I found it just looking at this

Good pictures, but I think that if you make the ground less bright (make the green collor a bit darker) it will look better. Just my opinion, though.

Bye.

I changed my mind, instead of asking everyone to make custom bosses for me. I decided to use the bosses from SMWC stuff.

Gramatical correction?

Bowser Jr. as Mouser

Super Mario 3D World (Green Star)

New Level:
Dusty Desert

Begin

Dino-Rhino and Dino-Torch

Fire bro

This is a secret

Never trust in a SMB3 brick

Avoid the cactos

I need of the Koopa Shell

If you collect all 4 Yoshi Coins

Above of Dino-Torch

Progress of my Main OW

Double post, oh my...

New Levels:
CHRONO SHRINE:

Starting the level: I clashed?

This pyramid is creepy

Gramatical correction?

Oh my...

A SKEWER

Avoid this all costs

Run Mario, Run

Secret exit

POW silver block

Enough said

I HATE SUN:

Angry Sun from SMB3

Venus on Quicksand

Avoiding the Piledriver, Cactus and Ninji

Enough said.

Beating ninjis

After of angry sun, face the Splitting Chucks

Okay.

At the intro sceen if you disable horizontal scrolling you won't see the cutoff.

Did you mean to be able to access every single level? Even the ones you HAVEN'T passed yet...?

It's great stuff! I see you have no trouble with custom sprites. Will you be inserting music down the line?

My favorite boss was at Peach's castle. It reminds me of Mega Man!

I've no complaints on my end!

Well, except for the disabling of scroll on the intro screen.

Keep it up!

VTuber, musician, composer, voice actor. Check out my socials!

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Originally posted by Dragonfly

Did you mean to be able to access every single level? Even the ones you HAVEN'T passed yet...?

He's used to make all levels opened while the hack is in WIP. Maybe he's forgotten to put this information because this hack is quite similar of his last attempt, when he's given up.

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Gramatical correction

Suggestion:
"These are the POW blocks. Differently of the p-switch, you have six seconds..."

That's it for now.

Bye.

Originally posted by Roberto zampari

Gramatical correction?

"These are P-blocks. They only give you six seconds to act."

Looks like a nice choco hack. Keep it up.

c3 winter 2021 | music stuff | youtube

Originally posted by MercuryPenny
Originally posted by Roberto zampari

Gramatical correction?

"These are P-blocks. They only give you six seconds to act."

Looks like a nice choco hack. Keep it up.

From the screenie, P blocks and POW blocks are different... perhaps:

"Unlike P-Switches, these POW blocks give you only 6 seconds to act."

Oh:

Originally posted by yoshiatom

I SERIOUSLY hope this isn't the final sprite for the boss. Please replace this sprite when you can.

And what exactly should he replace that megaman-type sprite WITH?

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P-Blocks makes more sense, except if you change their sprites to POW blocks. Maybe this fits better: "These are P-Blocks. Differently of p-switches, these blocks give you six seconds to act.".

Bye.

NEW LEVELS AND BASE ROM:
REACH TO THE TOWER:

Infiltrating at the tower

Oh no, Koopa Elites

Koopa Elites everywhere...

Badass Elite Parakoopa

Gramatical correction?

Like Megaman 2

Bullet Bills

Getting harder...

Security Alarms

Need avoid these

INAFUNE TOWER 1:

Gramatical correction?

Imortal chuck

P-Blocks again

Reflecting Fireballs

The coin in that screenshot indicates hidden mushroom

Avoid the grinders

Oh my...

Getting harder...

Crossed paths

INAFUNE TOWER 2:

The begin

Again, Reflecting Fireballs

Cross the path with thwimp

Thwomp in the tower

Badnik in the tower

Oh my...

Cross the path with badnik

Double thwimp

Morton boss

INAFUNE TOWER 3:

The museum part

There's no boss, but a survive mode with beck.

Gramatical correction?

World 4 Overworld.

WEEK BASE ROM

Originally posted by Roberto zampari

Gramatical correction?

"The main entrance is closed for security reasons. You'll need to find another way in."

Change "is" to "has".

"Oh no! I didn't expect you to make it." "I underestimated your abilities. I await you in the castle. If you can make it..."

c3 winter 2021 | music stuff | youtube

As for the second screenshot, "has violated" is still not correctly. It should be "has been violated".

Ah, and "immortal" should have double "m".

As for the last screenshot, you should correct "you haven't chance against me" to "you don't have any chance against me".

I think that's all. Keep going.

900th post

New levels:
WOODPECKER CLOUDS:

Start of this level

Gramatical correction?

Kazemon from my previous hack

Yellow rexes are faster

Avoid this

I'm hiting all the invisible blocks

Wait the right momment for hit the tornado

Kazemon with cardinal platforms

Oh my...

What the Boomerang bro are doing here?

The same for the thwomps

SWITCHED PATHS:

Kazemon again

Hit the ON/OFF switch and the path is switched

Be careful, chainsaws...

Dragon coin

That Wind

If you choose the paths correctly with the four dragon coins, you get the secret exit.

Three activated, one to go.

SKY FLEET ZONE:

Mechakoopas can fit perfectly in airship levels.

Look out.

That rocky wrench.

Wait the right moment.

Oh my...

Look out.

Wait the right moment.

I used the carol's lemmy. Anyway, what think about the NSMBWii Lemmy graphics.

BEAT BLOCK ZONE:

This level is based on Beat Block Galaxy from Super Mario Galaxy 2.

There are some blocks that move.

Ninjis...

How to cross the path (1)

How to cross the path (2)

Kazemon with Beat Blocks, oh my...

Boomerang Bro again...

TARVOS' PEAKS:

Gramatical correction?

New enemy appeared, monty mole.

Wait and cross the path.

I'm stomped the Chuck

Gramatical correction?

Baseball Chuck blocking the way

A Sledge bro appeared.

Piranha plants blocking the way.

MM1 WILY CASTLE:

The Castle #4, the concept is the same from my previous failure, but the level design changed drastically.

With blue switch activated, no problem with chain chomps...

Coincidence, don't think?

Conveyors

Conveyor with podoboos...

...thwimps...

...and grinders.

Badniks returned.

The same for metools.

Avoid this...

this...

and this.

BOSS:Beck fused with Thunder Slimer

Gramatical correction?

WEEK VERSION

Alright, just finished playing through the demo so far. Got a lot going for it, actually. You've got a pretty firm grip on level design, I really enjoyed the levels as I was playing, and they weren't so difficult I had to use save states like the majority of ROM Hacks I'm used to playing.

Really need to customize the music though, the SMW default songs don't really work with it, thematically.