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Bowser's Dimension
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Hello, I am making an 8 level semi-chocolate hack. I only finished the 1st level.
Download.

Please tell me what needs to be fixed, removed, added, and don't be a douche about it.

Screenshots:









Note the Wendy boss is a placeholder, and don't tell me anything about the overworld.

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"I HAVE FUCKING HAD IT WITH YOUR SHIT. You little fuckers are going to have your bodies ripped in half. I'll shove your asses so far down your throats that when you crap, you'll sing fucking Beethoven. tl;dr: Eat shit, faggots."
-Dr. Andonuts, Earthbound
Originally posted by Mr.Lemoncrook

That eye looks familiar... Could be wrong though.

Looks nice so far. I'd say that Mario clashes in a few of those screens, but other than that it looks good.

except for the floating fence argh

Originally posted by MercuryPenny
Originally posted by Mr.Lemoncrook

That eye looks familiar... Could be wrong though.

Looks nice so far. I'd say that Mario clashes in a few of those screens, but other than that it looks good.

except for the floating fence argh


Yes, that eye is from Eversion.

For the floating fence, it's mean't to be part of a broken bridge.

Also, you can play the level and have a full opinion on it.

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"I HAVE FUCKING HAD IT WITH YOUR SHIT. You little fuckers are going to have your bodies ripped in half. I'll shove your asses so far down your throats that when you crap, you'll sing fucking Beethoven. tl;dr: Eat shit, faggots."
-Dr. Andonuts, Earthbound
Looks cool Lemon.:D But you think you could tell us about the plot?
yeah, the plot of the hack is the most important aspect of it, so we'd suggest you tell us the story involving your hack. the level design doesn't look too bad. i would suggest thinking of a different idea for the bridge level, as the bridge gets cutoff in the broken areas of it. the title-screen also has a bad palette over the file-selection screen, but i know you're most likely going to fix it soon enough. in the nighttime levels, i'd suggest darkening the clouds a bit, as their brightness clashes with the nighttime sky; same goes with the mushroom's white dots. that last screenshot with the lemmy/wendy setup does look interesting, though.

would like to see more from this hack!

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Currently: Starting college!

Originally posted by superbot12
Looks cool Lemon.:D But you think you could tell us about the plot?


Plot? Err...

Mario was going to visit Yoshi, but he was missing and there was a keyhole. Mario uses the keyhole and it turned out to be a trap by Bowser.

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"I HAVE FUCKING HAD IT WITH YOUR SHIT. You little fuckers are going to have your bodies ripped in half. I'll shove your asses so far down your throats that when you crap, you'll sing fucking Beethoven. tl;dr: Eat shit, faggots."
-Dr. Andonuts, Earthbound



My Opinion:

+ The Leveldesign is fine for the most parts
+ Good Music
/ You are very generous with powerups in the beginning
/ The graphics are "Ok"
- Very tricky jumps in the 3rd part
- No midwaypoint
- Cutoff
- And the file select text is glitchy

Everything else is fine.








Originally posted by Superkingyoshi
My Opinion:

+ The Leveldesign is fine for the most parts
+ Good Music
/ You are very generous with powerups in the beginning
/ The graphics are "Ok"
- Very tricky jumps in the 3rd part
- No midwaypoint
- Cutoff
- And the file select text is glitchy

Everything else is fine.


Yes, I know about the cutoff, and I will will add the Midway point patch soon. For the file select, is there a way to change the color?

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"I HAVE FUCKING HAD IT WITH YOUR SHIT. You little fuckers are going to have your bodies ripped in half. I'll shove your asses so far down your throats that when you crap, you'll sing fucking Beethoven. tl;dr: Eat shit, faggots."
-Dr. Andonuts, Earthbound
Originally posted by Mr.Lemoncrook
For the file select, is there a way to change the color?


it should be using palette 1. check for all the blue-colored palettes and change them; it should be fixed.

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Currently: Starting college!
Hey what happened to your other hack? Is it cancelled or is it put on hold?
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