It looks nice, but something about the GFX seems.....flat.
Perhaps, do some work on the palettes to make the colors pop.
I also think the BG should be a little bit darker.

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That's a shit reason why you cancelled your other hack. Why don't you improve on yourself in order for you and your artistic works to get better.

Anyway, your screenshots aren't that bad but there is a definate difference in shading with the tiles and sprites...

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[19:43] <StrikeForcer> I also want to say that "because everything on the internet is definitely true!" is a derailment tactic that serves as a shorthand change for "I dont accept the facts"

[19:44] <StrikeForcer> When the information posted clearly is fact-based.

Man, that's a lot of pillow shading. Please remove them. Also, as Face said, these look really, really flat and boring. Try to spice them up a bit. Also, it's easy to notice the dirt is repeating. See this.

Edit: There aren't just pillow shading, but also wrongly shaded objects. Also, the flipped EAT thingy doesn't look the best, to be honest. And lastly, it is Chocolate, unless you did it on purpose.

Are you still working on it? It's looks good so far but maybe a few changes to the visuals and GFX of the hack because they look very plain and boring when I see them. Try to spice them up and then I'll be happy. BTW, level design is great!

This hack really needs to be noticed because I believe that you have potential. Once this hack is hopefully finished, I will play it and post my review. I really hope you can finish this and the other one.

If you finish both, I will give each hack a try. I also like how it literally looks like a chocolate hack.

Not sure about the level design there, m8. You've only shown us a few pics about the visuals, rather than how the level is designed.

Hi, I'm the Ultimate, you're OK?

I know the hack is about chocolate ...
But I think the sky should be blue.

Or a different color ... avoid bright colors ...

The look is very monochromatic (brown)