|File Name||A Mario Story [Remastered]|
|Submitted:||2015-01-24 05:27:43 PM by ThatBird447|
*All bugs fixed ---> There is 1 more bug, when you beat the bonus level and get the bonus game after that. Sorry for that!
*1 Bonus Level
*5 long levels + 2 short levels
*Snow- Cave and Castlelevels
I hope you have fun with my hack. You can play it without savestates!
Unfortunately I'm going to have to deny this hack primarily because there just isn't enough there to be a full game, though I have a feeling this is suppose to be a demo.
all the levels were a fairly reasonable length but the only "long" level was Some mountains the rest only took me a few minutes to run through. They also suffered from get item #1 to get item #2 to go through pipe to get item #3 to get item #4 to reach the goal. No one really likes item babysitting and that's what the primary focus on level design was.
On top of the length there's also quite a few bugs still left in the game mainly when it comes to grammar. here are a couple examples.
This should read
"Mario! Please come find
me! I'm somewhere on
the island! Please
This should be
of this hack!
even though the "I think so..." is out of place it is correct though I would suggest removing it.
Minor issues and suggestions:
Not a removal reason by itself I would suggest using some Map16 to make an upside down muncher to avoid this.
I would recommend working on your palettes because they don't have much in the form of a gradient and are pretty much just bright on bright which doesn't look all too good.
I would also suggest moving the 3up moons before the goal as during the score fade out Mario will walk through and collect them but doesn't actually make the moon disappear.
Once you fix this issues and add a bit more length to the hack it should be accepted no problem.