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Get rid of these munchers. This section looks way too hard compared to other parts of this level. Add some sprites instead (for example flying koopas).


Besides the whole level seems bland. Add more blocks, ledges and sprites. Make sure the enemies are a threat to the player but also aren't unfair. Here is a good tutorial.
im using sample tool to musics and i go putt ground on this things because us hard win this munchers
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That shading underneath the grass needs to be made darker than the main color used for the dirt. As of now, it looks like poor Mario has stumbled into an irradiated wasteland!

i like the koopas
new screnshot
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What am I look at? A badly deformed Koopa?


I wonder if you're actually listening to what we said. There's nothing interesting that differs one thing to another and that seems to be the pattern I've noticed in all of your threads so far. You don't take a random screenshot of an empty area and call it a day, you have to put up all your effort and add some sort of challenge that would usually be appealing to our eyes. We come by this forum to expect an unique project that renders us looking forward to playing it, and then we're faced with some screenshots of yours that feel like something really unsolid is going on. You should be more committing regarding that subject and fix a few bugs in your spare time.

But as for actual feedback (and I hope you consider it before you post your next update): what you've showed is lacking enemies, coins, decoration and so forth, not to mention the occasional ledge that has no corners every now and then. Check out the most recent accepted hacks and the tutorial Minimay linked to in order to become an outright experienced hacker sometime.
Don't take the first paragraph as an offense, but more as an advice. It's for your own best, and we want you to become better at designing something very well. You don't have to accept all criticism if you don't wish to, but you should avoid leaving the tiniest issues that might be there, if there are any.
i just no like the doors of the hut the doors ´kepping put everyone in the traped area
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As Sokoban said, the hut stage is doubtlessly an improvement. However, I'd still like to see a new version of the first stage you were showing. So far, as far as we know, none of the problems with the level have been addressed, and suffice it to say that they really need to be. I'd say the most glaring thing is the "shading" on the grass ledges; replace that light color with a darker one.

Just to clarify, since a lot of new hackers don't really realize this: No one here is trying to trash-talk you. We're just trying to help you make a better hack.

Anyway, hope we can help.
tired: 'JOYCON BOYZ'
wired: 'The Fellowship of the Switch'
Being completely honest, but this hack seems to not have anything going for it. The levels don't look interesting and the graphics don't add anything either, and since the title is EXGFX World (weird name by the way), I was going to expect better. Overall, I'm not too impressed, but I won't give up either. Hoping for more progress!
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I'm legitimately curious as to why your hack's name is exgfx world.
Originally posted by Agent Q
I'm legitimately curious as to why your hack's name is exgfx world.


I'm going to take a guess that it's because the hack has ExGFX in it. ;)
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What's the story of this hack?
i now learn how to use sprite tool so here is a goomba

first boss fryguy

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Yep, looks like the name's changed. While The Adventure of Mario is a bit more fitting than ExGFX World, I still think it could use some serious work. It's such a cliche name, and it doesn't tell us anything about the hack's story. Does the hack even have a story? If I were you, I'd try to come up with something more original and memorable that reflects the plot of the hack.

Also, you haven't showed us that anything we mentioned in the past has been fixed. As far as we know, you're ignoring us. I'd personally like to see that you've followed through on a few important fixes.
tired: 'JOYCON BOYZ'
wired: 'The Fellowship of the Switch'
Originally posted by Sokobansolver
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The Goomba looks a little dark.


I hope you can actually stick with one particular title this time. I noticed the thread title changed.


Oh... I just saw the name of the maker of this hack. I remember he changed the name of an older hack of his like five times or so.

Going on the latest screenshots, they still look bland. The Goomba looks ugly, and the level for the Fryguy boss just isn't good. What else could I say?
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