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Hey, Green Rex on the SMW Hack Named is"Luigi's Super Star Insanity Search"on Music in progress.

World 1 Map


Level 1: A Frozen


Please Don't Feedback leave it.#ab{;)}

I you want support a hack userbar it
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That palette needs reworking. Try to make the dirt more of a desaturated orange if you want to run it against those cool blue colours. Right now it's a bit too burnt umber looking and the contrast is a little weird.

Also, you have some cutoff on your donut bridge tiles. It's minor enough that it looks alright as is, but it'd look just a touch nicer with some kind of bordering block(s).

Your OW has some major perspective errors and just looks kind of boring.

In general, nothing about this looks terribly interesting except your OW border. I'd suggest you go back and take a good hard look at what you can do to make this hack great from the ground up, because this is not a terribly great start.

Sorry if I seem a bit rude. I'm just trying to be constructive here, I suppose...

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Originally posted by MelodicCodes
Sorry if I seem a bit rude. I'm just trying to be constructive here, I suppose...

Rude with criticism? No such thing.

Colors are very bright, but with some modification it could be a respectable style choice. I like that the first level is an icy one as well, but slipperness adds to the difficulty and it may be unftting for W1-1 level.
I agree with what everybody has already said. Just some more points about the OW quickly:

1 - the fortress is slightly odd looking.
2 - it's Luigi, yet the status bar says Mario. I'm sure there's tools that can let you edit the status bar for Mario and Luigi.
3 - the bushes that are in the ground don't look good with the palette changes. They are really bright.

However, there is one good thing I can say:

1 - the level that you're showing off looks to be not generic and designed in such a way so that it introduces the player to the game.

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Why is it called "Luigi's Super Star Insanity Search"? Is Luigi looking for his Insanity or is it this "Super Star"?
Originally posted by MelodicCodes
That palette needs reworking. Try to make the dirt more of a desaturated orange if you want to run it against those cool blue colours. Right now it's a bit too burnt umber looking and the contrast is a little weird.

Also, you have some cutoff on your donut bridge tiles. It's minor enough that it looks alright as is, but it'd look just a touch nicer with some kind of bordering block(s).

Your OW has some major perspective errors and just looks kind of boring.

In general, nothing about this looks terribly interesting except your OW border. I'd suggest you go back and take a good hard look at what you can do to make this hack great from the ground up, because this is not a terribly great start.

Sorry if I seem a bit rude. I'm just trying to be constructive here, I suppose...


Here a YY-CHR Donut Bridges's:



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Judging your last screens, I must say that, while your OW palettes improved greatly, the shapes are still boring. I suggest you could try to add more landscapes to your OW, so it won't be as bland as it is now.

About your donut bridge: I'm not seeing any difference from the original SMW one. Just saying.

About your level palette: Your icy palette is OK, except for the ledge bushes. They're kinda strange to me.

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Originally posted by Fierce Deity Manuz OW Hacker
About your donut bridge: I'm not seeing any difference from the original SMW one. Just saying.


Koopris fixed the cutoff on the ropes of the vanilla tiles. It's very minor and wasn't really accounted for in vanilla, but I still think it's a good idea to fix them, so I'm glad that these look much better.

Anyway, some of the issues on your overworld seem to have been cleared up, which is fantastic, but I'm still curious as to why the islands that don't rise out of the ground have cliff sections on the sides?

The overworld, while being technically better, still looks really boring. Everything's a rectangle. You have no interesting, complex shapes. It's kinda hard to get lost in a world that's just a bunch of rectangular plateaus.

I recall seeing some very impressive overworlds back when I lurked here a few years ago which would present a perfect example of what to do, but I can't seem to find anything like that right now. If anyone has a picture of a good overworld lying around, could they post it up as an example?

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New Screenshot!

Level 1-Home: Home


Level 1-2: Generic Plains
http://i.imgur.com/nUvPn0k.png (e: huge screen linked)

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EDIT: Fixed BBCode

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First of all, that cloud background is rather unfitting. It clashes with the foreground and generally doesn't look all that good. To be honest, I'd use default cloud background instead.
The start is very reminicent of Level 105. Is that intentional or just blatant editing?

Keep in mind that these tiles aren't solid and that the player can just kinda fall out of the world here.
Other than that, there's really not that much to comment on. It's, well, generic. Not much going on.

Also, it's rather obvious that English isn't exactly your strong suit. Someone already mentioned that the hack's name is kinda odd - I think "Luigi's Insane Super Star Search" would make more sense, but I really don't know what you were going for anyway. Either way, "insanity" is missing its T on the overworld.
Originally posted by Lazy
First of all, that cloud background is rather unfitting. It clashes with the foreground and generally doesn't look all that good. To be honest, I'd use default cloud background instead.
The start is very reminicent of Level 105. Is that intentional or just blatant editing?

Keep in mind that these tiles aren't solid and that the player can just kinda fall out of the world here.
Other than that, there's really not that much to comment on. It's, well, generic. Not much going on.

Also, it's rather obvious that English isn't exactly your strong suit. Someone already mentioned that the hack's name is kinda odd - I think "Luigi's Insane Super Star Search" would make more sense, but I really don't know what you were going for anyway. Either way, "insanity" is missing its T on the overworld.



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The BG still clashes. You can make it less gray, for example.
Originally posted by Erik557
The BG still clashes. You can make it less gray, for example.



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and Green Coin replacment Dragon Coin

Is Collected:

on the Green Coin changed to Red and Green color, on Green Hud to 5 Collected Green Coins.


this Jumping Piranha Plant shoots Fireball, on the Goomba walking ground.

Do you still need it?

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I think you must lower the sky color.
Originally posted by Erik557
I think you must lower the sky color.

Thanks Erik557!

and the added to Message on Home:


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looks great man u know where i can find a raccon luigi of gba smw

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