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[DROPPED] 4-1: Nice Ice Rice Twice [IPS Download]
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Puns! Anyways, this level takes place on a frozen haunted boardwalk leading to the Mushroom Kingdom.
Screenshots:



As it progresses, I'll post more screens.
This is a unique idea for a level, so I'm curious to see where you go with it.

The palette is interesting. I think the blue on the clouds in the background could stand to be tweaked to be a bit more purple, so it blends in a bit better with the empty background color.

There's also some weird cutoff-looking thing where the left side of the box connects to the top-left corner piece. I think the outside 8x8 tile on the side of the box needs to be x flipped or something to fix it.
idk what to put here
Oh, I just notice the cutoff. I'll fix it ASAP.
The gimmick/idea sounds nice, and those screenshots look cool. Apart from the error k3fka reported I think that the way those platforms are filled in is weird. Might be just me.
Originally posted by Erik
The gimmick/idea sounds nice, and those screenshots look cool. Apart from the error k3fka reported I think that the way those platforms are filled in is weird. Might be just me.


Yeah. Anyways, good work nin.

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Even if the idea is nice I don't really enjoyed this. That doesn't mean it's bad, but it has some issues.
You used few enemy variety, which made the level feel boring. The blue koopas weren't that of an obstacle, and there were sections were there was nothing to do but wait.
A problem this level has is that you didn't set the scroll settings properly. It should be "vertical scroll at will" but it's set to "No scroll unless flying,etc.".
I still think that the way those platforms are filled is weird. You have this:

But IMO it should be like this:


Other things:

nice. Just check "Disable No Yoshi intro" in #lm{othprops}

This looks bad
Also, check the "Use custom palette in this level".
And I told you not to use Map16 page 7. But at east it doesn't overwrite important tiles.

Needs reworking. Add more nemy variety, better placement and fix all those issues.
Originally posted by Erik557
I still think that the way those platforms are filled is weird. You have this:

But IMO it should be like this:

That looks way worse, as it currently is it's at least not a literal kitchen tile wall, but has some texture to it.

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Ok, here's the UPDATED SUPER DUPER AWESOME MEGA WORNDERFUL ULTRA ULIMATE LEVEL THING.

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(I still need some level feedback)
Sorry, forgot about this.

agh. I don't know what to think. I still think it has some problems. Mainly and the biggest: the sprite placement is really poor: some enemies present no threat to the player:

These Big Boos are useless.
And instances where the enemies were placed in a boring way, without different elevations, etc. . Also I think the level should be slippery but that's up to you. And the custom music thing, too.

Borderline between reject and fix. Will wait other reviews for a verdict.
Personally I think the main problem with this level is that there's really nothing interesting going on with it. There's very few enemy variety and as Erik said some of them either don't even present a threat or can just easily be avoided with no effort. Still I think the idea is somewhat interesting so I'll go for a fix.

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So will you show more progress or what?
I'm thinking of dropping and making a Pre-Boss room instead. I'll contact you towmorrow with my final decision if that's ok.

For now, yes, I'm still working on fixing the level.
Time to abuse my power and close this then.
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