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[APPROVED] [4-8] Peach's Perilous Airship!
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In collaboration with RockyTheTigre, I present this level. Please not that things have changed since these pics have been taken (I'll take not of them as they go.)

On the second platform, there is a Thunder Sumo Bro Where The Charging Chuck is and a Baseball Chuck where the Shelless Koopa is.

There is a Baseball Chuck on the second platform now.
Forgive my rudeness, but it really doesn't look like an airship. There is nothing to indicate this thing can fly and for Miyamoto's sake it has cobwebs on it! What kind of vehicle - let alone a flying one - has cobwebs on it? It really needs a better tileset.

allow shy guy emojis in post footers you cowards!
As mentioned, I have changed things around since these screenshots have been taken. Cobwebs have been removed. The level has Auto-Scroll and a Moving BG. It looks like it's flying in-game.
Very well, I'll take your word for it. Some suggestions though: First, remove the BG scrolling. All of it. Stars are much too far away to look anything short of ridiculous when moving around in the BG. Slap some clouds on BG3 and have those scroll instead. Add some propellers/jets or something to give it look of an airship rather than a flying bundle of sticks (maybe you have this already, what do I know). Please note that I'm not trying to being you down, I just want the level to be as good as possible.

allow shy guy emojis in post footers you cowards!
Still working on this. I'm waiting for my partners level part first though. Dunno if he claimed a sublevel yet or not.
I haven't claimed a sublevel yet, though I think I'll claim E4. I've finished doing the Exanimation of the level yesterday, so I have to finish it soon.
Looks challenging. I would change the sky palette though. Also using pokeys in an airship feels eeeh. I hope you use some doomship burners.
What if the pokey was reskinned? I agree that it doesn't fit thematically but I can see why it was placed where it was.

allow shy guy emojis in post footers you cowards!
Nobody's pointing out that all those sumo bros clearly won't end well?
Hmm, doesn't look like the fire from their lightning will turn out that great as they're currently placed. That can be easily fixed, but what's the justification for the fire not being killed by the wind?

allow shy guy emojis in post footers you cowards!
Not bad, I just found some things, mainly with Sumo Bros.:

This Sumo Bro. doesn't throw flames

This one doesn't even show when he could pose a danger, only when you're in this part.

At first this one didn't do anything, then he threw flames but they're a bit glitched out.

Fix those and you should be good to go.

Also I need some input from Rocky..
Bad Patch.
It's better now, just this one Sumo Bro. that is useless:

Still, approved your section.
And I need progress from you, Rocky..
Rock's been busy. Dunno if he'll finish.

Was my OW accepted?
Originally posted by ForthRightMC
Rock's been busy. Dunno if he'll finish.
I'm sure he will finish the section, my cloned counterpart.

This is so insane! I've got powers, and I'm fighting supervillains!

-Rena Rouge
Room 1/3

This is the first room out of 3. It's kinda finished, however, I'm not sure which background to use. I also don't know if the tileset's okay or not, as the logships were replaced in Nin's level as well. I also am considering to make this an indoor area instead of another Ship level, as that'd make sense when you play Nin's part, as Morton goes into the pipe.
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