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DaSpongeBobMan - Blueberry Plains (11th update!)
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This is my level for VLDC9.
















Fresh new .zip:
11th updateMOAR FEEDBACK IS APPRECIATED.

Custom music:Yes
Secret exit:Yes

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The images are screwed up for me. They aren't loading here.
i think i'm back

Layout by RanAS
Originally posted by Pedro156
The images are screwed up for me. They aren't loading here.

That's because they linked it to the website instead of the direct image, although that's easy to fix:

Originally posted by DaSpongeBobMan




I really like this style, it also reminds me of Green Hill Zone. I would suggest working a little bit on the background hills' palette (that green looks weird) and the yellow on the turn blocks (a little too strong).

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Thanks, RanAS. And I totally agree with you. This level looks very nice. I really like the palettes, except for that flaws tahat RanAS pointed out.
i think i'm back

Layout by RanAS
Thanks! What do you mean the green looks weird? It looks good to me. And the yellow - I like it the way it is.

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The green looks okay, but the turn blocks are definitely too strong.

Well I guess we have a sonic level here :p
They mean it's too bright and saturated and I agree with them. Toning down these colours will help. Otherwise it looks good.

I like what you did with the mushroom platforms. They remind me SMB1 trees.
Yeah, about the ledge, I mixed one of the tiles for Iggy's platform with the mushroom ledge parts to make it a SMW-styled SMB ledge.

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I personally like the bright colors. This is a surprisingly good level from someone so new.

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You can get the .ips file from my file bin since I don"t know how to upload it in this reply.

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Originally posted by DaSpongeBobMan
You can get the .ips file from my file bin since I don"t know how to upload it in this reply.


Click the A

Originally posted by FAQ
On the toolbar, there's a green underlined "A" button for links, and a tiny picture with a blue sky and green hills for pictures. Put in the complete URL and make sure the URL is on the internet, not a file stored locally on your computer.


By the way the aesthetics are fantastic in this level, I don't really have a problem with the coin palettes because it's a pretty bright and boldly colored level anyway, so it kinda fits. A lot of people prefer washed out colors but I think that these colors can work just as well.
Thanks!

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Originally posted by DaSpongeBobMan
Thanks!


Also I should mention that you have to put some text in for the link or it won't show up (I noticed that you didn't put a link in the submission thread and it would suck to get dq'ed for that) Basically put text in like this:

[url=]example text[/url]

The actual link goes after the url=

Hope this helps I guess :P
Level update

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Third update

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Sixth update

This time, toned the colors down a little more and changed the ground.

Also you get to see more screenshots:
Main sublevel
Skewer Edit: Image stretches table, changed to link. Link

Cloud sublevel


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Why doesn't anyone give me more feedback?#tb{:(}

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Because nobody's obligated to give feedback in all honesty. Giving feedback is one's choice. And tip for the future: if you complain about not getting feed: You'll have a lesser chance of getting it, as the sense of humor on this site is something else.
Cloud subsection looks beautiful! That thwomp sun is odd though, it seems like it's just there.

Also maybe cover the right part of the second screenshot so people don't waste time looking for coins or powerups over there.
Originally posted by DaSpongeBobMan
Why doesn't anyone give me more feedback?#tb{:(}


It's probably because you linked your entry wrong. Lucky for you though, I was able to find it in your file bin.

Time for feedback.

Overall, Your level wasn't bad, but it could have been a lot better. This was a pretty forgettable level in terms of design. There were a few fun obstacles here and there, but there wasn't anything that interesting. It was just a regular old "go right" level. There wasn't much creativity either other than the use of aesthetics. Speaking of aesthetics, the aesthetics were the one thing that I was proud of in this level. They were very interesting and made the level look like something new. Overall, this wasn't a bad level, but it could be improved.

SCORES:

Design: 16/30
Creativity: 9/20
Appeal: 8/10

Overall: 33/60

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