SMW Sequel - Works in Progress

I am working on my hack, I had my old hacks from 2015 before the drive got formatted. Working on Level 1. Beta download coming soon
Screenshots:
Bonus Part of Level 1

Level 1
http://bin.smwcentral.net/u/28887/Yoshi%2527s%2BIsland%2B1.png
Yellow Switch Palace
http://bin.smwcentral.net/u/28887/Yellow%2BSwitch%2BPalace.png

Edit: Better screenshots

Modedit: Better amount of table stretch (zero)

I'll take your word for it.

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Originally posted by Sokobansolver

I'll take your word for it.

Well, here's hacks i did in 2015
SMW 2: The Sequel Edition (SMW) (I only made world 1)
A hack (level) made with assistance of my cousin
Super Bounce World (NOKIA Bounce Game in SMW) (only level 1)
Other hacks weren't that serious project

Screenshots, please.

Originally posted by Kaisaan Siddiqui

Screenshots, please.

I can't cuz it's night and I am writing from the tablet.(I live in Kazakhstan) I will post tomorrow. Got Da deal M8?

Originally posted by Lemon Productions from YouTube

Originally posted by Kaisaan Siddiqui

Screenshots, please.

I can't cuz it's night and I am writing from the tablet.(I live in Kazakhstan) I will post tomorrow. Got Da deal M8?

Then you should've made the thread WITH the screenshots; otherwise, this will probably get taken down.

Originally posted by Kaisaan Siddiqui

Originally posted by Lemon Productions from YouTube

Originally posted by Kaisaan Siddiqui

Screenshots, please.

I can't cuz it's night and I am writing from the tablet.(I live in Kazakhstan) I will post tomorrow. Got Da deal M8?

Then you should've made the thread WITH the screenshots; otherwise, this will probably get taken down.

Will it be taken down by 13-15 hours?

Most likely, usually they give you a 24 hour warning or something like that.

If you've got visuals to show (screenshots, videos and whatnot), then post them as soon as you can and it'll be alright. In the future, though, you shouldn't start a hack thread if you can't show visuals right away.

(rationale: what kind of feedback are you expecting if you're just announcing you're making a hack?)

Pro Tip:

Without seeing any screenshots nobody has anything to really comment on and they might not even know if you are really making a hack or not.

Its like the old phrase says: Seeing is believing.

Originally posted by WhiteYoshiEgg

If you've got visuals to show (screenshots, videos and whatnot), then post them as soon as you can and it'll be alright. In the future, though, you shouldn't start a hack thread if you can't show visuals right away.

(rationale: what kind of feedback are you expecting if you're just announcing you're making a hack?)

I will get on my PC soon.

There's a cut-off in the 5th screen. The block of ? boxes in the bonus room looks pointless. The first few screens have cement block spam. It all looks kinda randomly placed. Screens 07 thru 0A look empty.
Also, unless you're using SA-1, I don't think there's any point in placing one Banzai Bill right after another since chances are only 1 of them would spawn.

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Originally posted by Sokobansolver

There's a cut-off in the 5th screen. The block of ? boxes in the bonus room looks pointless. The first few screens have cement block spam. It all looks kinda randomly placed. Screens 07 thru 0A look empty.
Also, unless you're using SA-1, I don't think there's any point in placing one Banzai Bill right after another since chances are only 1 of them would spawn.

It is only a beta of Level #1.
Fixes will be applied soon.

For the bonus room, I would suggest keeping the horizontal pipe all on one screen, as it will prevent unnecessary scrolling.

Other than that, it's at least a starting point.

something is supposed to go here

I've gotta say... This one is really barebones... Cement block spam? Check. Cut-off? Check. Enemy spam? Check. Bland level design? Check. Sprite tile issues? Judging by the ammount of enemies in that first screenshot, I think it's a check as well. I know this is your first hack and all, but man do you need some practice at level design. Try playing some of the accepted hacks in the SMW Hacks section. Perhaps that'll help you get some inspiration and see what good level design is.

Also, I suggest you to tinker around with the palettes, since custom palettes make everything better. Also, to avoid having ForthRightMC stalking your thread and asking if it has custom music, I'd suggest you putting some, well, custom music I guess. But that last one isn't really a must do by any means, but still, it's always a good thing to have custom music in your hack.

Don't take this the wrong way, I'm trying to help you here by giving you feedback. Constructive criticism, if you want to call it that. Anyway, good luck with your hack, Lemon person from YouTube with a really long name.

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That image is quite the stretch (and I would know that because I sometimes experience that problem too)

Anyway, I'm not sure if this is your first hack (judging this was your first post), but without constructive criticism, this doesn't look relatively bad for a first hack.

Trust me, my first hack had all of the things that you shouldn't have in a SMW hack (i.e graphical glitches, goal traps, spammed cement blocks, stacking munchers, etc.) I just wished I still had it today

As for suggestions, replace those cement blocks with grassland tiles. In my opinion, cement blocks should only be used as much as question blocks or in 1 x 1 tile spaces (i.e. 1-wide walls or 1-height ground).

Also, you shouldn't place two Banzai Bills that close together since Mario and other sprites may turn invisible. If you're using SA-1, you should try without it so you don't abuse the amount of sprites you put in a level.

Overall, you're doing pretty good, just keep at it!

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Originally posted by chineesmw

That image is quite the stretch (and I would know that because I sometimes experience that problem too)

Anyway, I'm not sure if this is your first hack (judging this was your first post), but without constructive criticism, this doesn't look relatively bad for a first hack.

Trust me, my first hack had all of the things that you shouldn't have in a SMW hack (i.e graphical glitches, goal traps, spammed cement blocks, stacking munchers, etc.) I just wished I still had it today

As for suggestions, replace those cement blocks with grassland tiles. In my opinion, cement blocks should only be used as much as question blocks or in 1 x 1 tile spaces (i.e. 1-wide walls or 1-height ground).

Also, you shouldn't place two Banzai Bills that close together since Mario and other sprites may turn invisible. If you're using SA-1, you should try without it so you don't abuse the amount of sprites you put in a level.

Overall, you're doing pretty good, just keep at it!

I was SMW hacking in Spring-Summer 2015. Then I took a very big break from being a Mario fan and forgot all the techniques of SMW hacking. So I am a kind of beginner although I was doing better in 2015.
Also later my HDD got formatted during repairing my PC. And I lost my awesome SMW hacks from 2015

Suika Ibuki - 25107

Yeah if you're starting now just keep practicing, you never start off with amazing level design, just try to inspire yourself on other hacks (or even games) and try to vary more so your level doesn't looks so... straight, add hills, pits, things that make the player do something other than moving forward other than enemies, just take off all enemies from your level and you will see there isn't really much stuff.
You should start improving with time, trust me my first hack was way worse than that.

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Originally posted by Suika Ibuki

Yeah if you're starting now just keep practicing, you never start off with amazing level design, just try to inspire yourself on other hacks (or even games) and try to vary more so your level doesn't looks so... straight, add hills, pits, things that make the player do something other than moving forward other than enemies, just take off all enemies from your level and you will see there isn't really much stuff.
You should start improving with time, trust me my first hack was way worse than that.

Pits n stuff will be added tomorrow.

Eh, doesn't look too good to be honest.
I would really suggest you to read through this to get started.