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-STORY-
Peach gets captured, and Mario has to save her. This one world demo just shows how n00bish I am at LM. The fake HDMA on "Sunset Waters" (because who needs levelASM?) and the glitchy small Mario graphic when pressing up. (Don't even mention that because I already know!)

-CREDITS-
Gamma V (Alot of exgfx, nsmbu music) Dan, Link901 (Snow koopas, going to be used later in the game)
Sinister Pixel (Desert music)
Jimmy52905 (NSMB Main Theme) imamelia (NSMB Castle)
Mikeyk for custom sprites.
Ersanio, Romi for goal flag
Tato (I think) for the beach music

-SCREENSHOTS-











-DOWNLOADS-

Updated version!
PATCH WITH FLIPS!

http://bin.smwcentral.net/u/30092/SMA%2B1.5.zip

-CHANGES-
0.1 First Release
0.2 Fixed LOTS of things
0.3 World 1 complete!
0.4 Castle #1 lengthened
1.0 Sunset Waters Slopes fixed
1.1 World 2 complete
1.3 World 3-1, 3-2, 3-3, all complete
1.4 World 4... in progress, World 2-3 modified.
1.4 not uploaded yet, be patient


And, by the way, be lookin' for that secret world later in
development
(Look in lunar magic, if you dare)

And people with problems on level 1, redownload updated version.

The secret world is basically world-e


Click here for the code to paste in your signature.

I'm gonna submit it to the hacks section, but nothing of mine gets accepted.
My current hack(s)

I can draw graphics, test and criticize hacks.
and a little asm too
This looks flat and weird.

The 2 screenshots from the levels, you show a flat land with the goal and another flat land with an enemy.

A flat land with NOTHING, no decoration, no gimmick, and the background is strange.

EDIT: And why you show a hack if you know its not good?

This is a section for feedback, because the people that post stuff here, gonna be make the showed hack done (or a demo) and submit it.

Dude, are you going to submit that?

EDIT²: There is nothing to give feedback, really, just the things i said. Learn more about Lunar Magic and try it again.

EDIT³ Dont get me wrong, i like it to see how a newcomer try to make a hack and put effort in it, but there must be more than a flat land with a strange background and a glitched goal... i hope this is the last edit of my post.
Originally posted by niko
entire post


That was unnecessary and confusing. And wrong, you don't have to submit your hack to the site in order to have a WIP thread.

Anyway from what you have here, it looks to me like a good start. Is this your first hack ever?
new.sfc
P.A.U.L.
Paul '96
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And why you show a hack if you know its not good?


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This is a section for feedback


exactly



Yeah, that is fairly good for a first hack actually (mine was a lot worse at least lol). The design does seem lacking from what I can see - it's really flat, without many visible obstacles or anything else to make it fun to play (could be just the start of the level though, as it seems to be the first one. I'd still suggest varying the terrain a bit).

Graphics are decent but I'm not a huge fan of the background, the grass (?) at the top of the hills doesn't look that good (lacks shading and doesn't "connect" with the ground below it), and the palette could be changed to help differentiate it from the foreground a bit more.

I was going to try out the demo but it doesn't seem to be working, I instantly die when I enter the first level. Might be something on my end tho
Originally posted by niko
stuff


Your hacks aren't the greatest either.
I think people have different opinnions, and maybe i am alone if i say just flat land and nothing else is not a good wip thread, whatever.

Originally posted by Cynook
Your hacks aren't the greatest either.


A bit off topic, because i just say MY opinnion about the thread and you just say you don't like my hacks.

But ok.

Originally posted by danwaleby
That was unnecessary and confusing


Maybe because my english sucks.

The thing i try to said is, a flat land with nothing is no good wip thread. and i say it again, its just my opinnion.
@niko
Yeah it's flat, but you didn't need to be that harsh.
BANANA SLAMMA.
thats right, i be too harsh, im say sorry for that.

next time i will say it more friendly.
I mean it was an unnecessary harsh. Sometimes it can get the message to someone, but they don't have to listen to your feedback. I'd be harsh, when they don't listen to feedback, that is necessary to get accepted.
BANANA SLAMMA.
I actually really like that title screen, I don't know why. Leave it :p
new.sfc
P.A.U.L.
Paul '96
Okay, i talk with my friend pixel about my post and yeah, it was too harsh and not really on point.

Next time i will just give feedback and thats it.

Thanks for the in the most part constructive critic to my post, next time i make it better.
Originally posted by danwaleby
Originally posted by niko
entire post


That was unnecessary and confusing. And wrong, you don't have to submit your hack to the site in order to have a WIP thread.

Anyway from what you have here, it looks to me like a good start. Is this your first hack ever?

The first uploaded one.
My current hack(s)

I can draw graphics, test and criticize hacks.
and a little asm too
Originally posted by Aeon
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And why you show a hack if you know its not good?


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This is a section for feedback


exactly



Yeah, that is fairly good for a first hack actually (mine was a lot worse at least lol). The design does seem lacking from what I can see - it's really flat, without many visible obstacles or anything else to make it fun to play (could be just the start of the level though, as it seems to be the first one. I'd still suggest varying the terrain a bit).

Graphics are decent but I'm not a huge fan of the background, the grass (?) at the top of the hills doesn't look that good (lacks shading and doesn't "connect" with the ground below it), and the palette could be changed to help differentiate it from the foreground a bit more.

I was going to try out the demo but it doesn't seem to be working, I instantly die when I enter the first level. Might be something on my end tho


Path with floating IPS. Worked on mine when I tested.
My current hack(s)

I can draw graphics, test and criticize hacks.
and a little asm too
Originally posted by danwaleby
I actually really like that title screen, I don't know why. Leave it :p

Well you should like the new one (It's from the userbar)


My current hack(s)

I can draw graphics, test and criticize hacks.
and a little asm too
Correct me if I'm wrong should have 10 worlds with 4 levels each for a total of 40 levels from what I understand
Originally posted by Grillollo
Correct me if I'm wrong should have 10 worlds with 4 levels each for a total of 40 levels from what I understand

Yes 10 worlds, w1 has 4, w2 has 4, w3 has 4, w4 has 6 i believe, rest are 5 i think. w10 has about 16.
My current hack(s)

I can draw graphics, test and criticize hacks.
and a little asm too
All I'm gonna say is: NEVER upload your first hack. Ever. Because all it is is an experiment.
Originally posted by Paperdomo101
All I'm gonna say is: NEVER upload your first hack. Ever. Because all it is is an experiment.
That's not entirely true. While first hacks tend to lack quality and the hackers lack experience, some first hacks come out nice. I think this isn't always the case.
So doing a calculation I got 59 levels right?, how many exit would correspond
Originally posted by Paperdomo101
All I'm gonna say is: NEVER upload your first hack. Ever. Because all it is is an experiment.

Technically, it's not my first hack i've ever made. I have made hacks before this on my computer, but the day before I was going to post it, the hard drive died. No backups. Eventually I just put a new drive in, downloaded LM and continued my hacking. I know my hack isn't that good, but some people just judge a book by it's cover a lot on the site, or more like a hack by it's screenshots.
EDIT: Actually, it was about a few weeks before the drive died
My current hack(s)

I can draw graphics, test and criticize hacks.
and a little asm too
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