Tip: You can use Lunar Magic's Overworld Layer 3 Editing system to edit or create your own layer 3 images (castle bricks, fish, rocks) and apply unique effects per level via the Layer 3 Bypass in the main editor.
Mario has a good day but the two shadow took the 12 magic stars so mario is so mad for this.The two shadow use the 12 magic stars to make earth be the dark world.
World 1 100%
World 2 100%
World 3 100%
World 4 94%
World 5 68%
World 6 09%
World 7 00%
Yeah, please do something more original, because this looks like a blatant copy of my hack, the name, the title screen and even the colors of the stars, if you want to do a hack, at the least don't copy the others.
Other than that, the palletes of the background of the two levels are lookong really weird.
And why mario is walking on the water in the last image?
Changing the plot up a little shouldn't be too hard, yeah.
Though I mean, just because it uses 12 thingies that's not really a ripoff, is it? Does your hack have "the shadows" too, GD? (Can't tell from the screenshots and didn't play it.)
@RZIBARA: Alright makes sense now. But you know I don't know why people give this hack crap. I mean I've played it, the levels are original, and well done. There are other hacks, that have similar vibes, and they don't hated. Userbar equipped.
Sorry for maybe harsh critizism but in all honestly that overworld map looks terriblyawful.
There is nothing like perspective or any type of realism at all and most of the palettes are either too bright or just ugly from the get-go.
The overall way of progress is definetly orientated if not copied from New Super Mario World 1 from G.D.
Is that some kind of trend for some reason?
I could most likely tell all the world themes without even seing all maps.
The ripped and drawn graphics are either imported terribly or just look overall weird (Green hills on green base is kinda strange). The grass on the castles somehow turned yellow for some reason and the sunken ghost ship is now fully made out of water.
I could take my time and mark all the perspective and realism errors but it isn't worth it.
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Lemme get to the point(s)!
- improve all the basic errors (redoing all of it would be best)
- atleast somewhere near original ideas (plainly ripping things off and asking for random stuff via PM is NOT helping)
- become a good/better SMW Hacker in general (takes a lot of time but if you want to make a good hack it is worth it)
Alright, it's no coincidence anymore: this is a ripoff of 12 Magic Orbs. The world themes are similar, the stars are literally the same order as the orbs, and the level concepts themselves (especially World 3) is literally the same as 12 Magic Orb's World 3. Hell, the terrible overworld you made is LITERALLY structurally created exactly like 12MO's overworld. At this point, I won't be surprised if you tried to ripoff the submaps too.
I've been watching in the background for a while, and at this point I've had it with you (and I don't even know you). Seriously, this just baffles me that this just looks like a ripoff of something far better, and I'm more surprised that G.D. isn't more insulted. This isn't just a situation where someone tries to ripoff someone elses' style (Choconilla Rise, anyone?), this is stealing a hack concept without much originality and executed poorly.
I wouldn't be surprised if A) you're making this hack to troll GD, or B) you love 12 Magic Orbs so much that you're making a hack shockingly similar to it. I wouldn't just redo the overworld, I'd literally start over the entire thing if I were you. It's hard to restart at first, but once you do, you'll feel better about yourself in the end. Don't let your anger be thrown at us after you read what we have to say, otherwise you'll make yourself look bad, and when submitted the mods WILL reject it. If it does get accepted, people will continually call it a ripoff and you will never escape from it. Save yourself from this trap before things get REALLY ugly for you in the future.
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