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[219] kamekku14 - Dragon Valley (FINAL .bps UPDATE XV) (OH, AND FEEDBACK APPRECIATED, TOO!)
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UPDATED .bps PATCH NOW AVAILABLE!!!
CUTESY LINK TO MY SUBMISSION!!!
Originally posted by Noivern
Originally posted by kamekku14
Can we get a chance to make theme levels? If I were you, I could make a Freedom Planet-themed VLDC level.

You can make whatever theme you want as long as it fits the rules of the contest. Go for it.

Main Section (WIP)
Long ago, this is a place where dragons have lived. But now, only one dragon (or some sort) lives in this valley...

It's pretty hard to make an SMW level based on a level from Freedom Planet, but however, it took me more time to finish it. Anywai, I've got the first section done, and now I'm working on the second section so give me feedback and criticism if necessary.

With all being said, have fun!
[17-02-2017 10:32:14 PM] <LucasRCD> Of course kamekku decides to make a Freedom Planet-based level
[17-02-2017 10:32:20 PM] <LucasRCD> Why wouldn't he
[17-02-2017 10:32:40 PM] <Hobz> lol
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Not bad, but some areas look like they have way too many enemies to deal with, in particular around screen 05-06. You should really tone it down some. SA-1 does allow for some really neat setups that would be otherwise impossible (levels with buoyancy are a pain to design with pure vanilla) but I'm not too fond of abusing it like this.
Originally posted by Aeon
Not bad, but some areas look like they have way too many enemies to deal with, in particular around screen 05-06. You should really tone it down some. SA-1 does allow for some really neat setups that would be otherwise impossible (levels with buoyancy are a pain to design with pure vanilla) but I'm not too fond of abusing it like this.

Oh, thankies for advice, Aeon. Now, I'll show you something in the second section:

It's a secret path to secret something.
When you press it with the blue P-Switch, this happens:


And, OF COURSE, since the thread title says "NEEDING HELP", I need help about something:
I was looking for this port of this song because I wanted to use it in my level. I posted it on Music Trouble Center, but unfortunately, no one didn't claimed it...yet. #thp{:(}
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Originally posted by kamekku14

Oh, thankies for advice, Aeon. Now, I'll show you something in the second section:

It's a secret path to secret something.
When you press it with the blue P-Switch, this happens:


And, OF COURSE, since the thread title says "NEEDING HELP", I need help about something:
I was looking for this port of this song because I wanted to use it in my level. I posted it on Music Trouble Center, but unfortunately, no one didn't claimed it...yet. #thp{:(}


...How is there a P-activated pipe? Is that with Exanimation?

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Originally posted by Ivy
...How is there a P-activated pipe? Is that with Exanimation?

Of course! I use exanimation to do it. I got the idea from Noivern/Impetus' VLDC9 level, Subterranean Glow.
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A sneak peek of the Secret Exit route for this level. What will it be?

It gets more mind-boggling than the others. (Since the level is athletic-based.)
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Blah.

Anyways, I've completed both the second and secret sections right now.

Give me feedback.

(Also, I can't wait to see anyone wants to port this song, tbh. See my post here.)
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I noticed that you have to go back and forth with 4 P-switches in order to get the secret exit. This is excessive item babysitting, repetitious, and boring as hell. Please change it, as I am not looking forward to playing that at all.

Screen 19 and 1A of the second section is a ridiculously long platform ride that doesn't really add anything to the level. The level is already so long without a midpoint, and the fact that you're adding that is insane.
Honestly it's a bit hard to give good feedback with those huge screens alone, a demo patch would be a lot more helpful as you can see how these obstacles play out in-game.
Originally posted by ft029
I noticed that you have to go back and forth with 4 P-switches in order to get the secret exit. This is excessive item babysitting, repetitious, and boring as hell. Please change it, as I am not looking forward to playing that at all.

Screen 19 and 1A of the second section is a ridiculously long platform ride that doesn't really add anything to the level. The level is already so long without a midpoint, and the fact that you're adding that is insane.


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Yeah, that's a great improvement.
Alright! Just finished the main section! But the only things required for completion are:
  • Custom Music (see my post)
  • Goal section
  • BPS patch
  • Source files (for submission)
  • Cameo appearance


Feedback is appreciated. I'm still in a hurry!!! #thp{:s2}
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fam if someone does start porting that it's likely not gonna be done in 10 days. you should probably look for alternatives (i have no suggestions i hate song hunting sorry).

anyway as aeon said it's hard to give solid feedback only based on screenshots we don't really have an idea of how the level plays. is it in a state to be tested at all? just upload a bps and post it here, you don't have to submit it first.
Lilac's Treehouse
It's hard to recreate Lilac's Treehouse from Freedom Planet using SMW's existing sources, but nonetheless, I've finally finished my level this time!


@Sixcorby: Oh, I have no idea! #smw{o_O} I might do a post about music suggestions in the meantime. Keep an eye out for the .bps patch soon! #thp{;)}
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Let's face it: Sixcorby told me that I need to find some music alternatives for my level, so I had a chance for what song I wanted to use. Pick one of these:
  1. Kirby's Block Ball - Cappy's Stage (KDL3 Remix)
  2. Kid Dracula - Stage 1
  3. The Mountain remix from the VLDC7 Sondtrack
  4. Sonic: After the Sequel - Combat Night Zone
  5. Mario Tennis: Power Tour - Training Area
  6. Lemon Angel (PC98) - LA07.FMX
  7. [your option here]
If you pick one of those six choices or suggest a better one mentioned on #7, I might use it for my level. Good luck!
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It's almost done. #thp{zzz3}
Give me sleep and feedback. In the meantime, I'll show you the REAL screenies!!!


Have fun! #thp{;)}
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I've just updated the .bps patch + submission so now you can easily take the secret exit route less frustrating.

Download

EDIT: OMG! PALINDROMATIC POST!!!
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FINAL VERSION
pyro mentioned that I didn't include that coin trail to the third Dragon Coin. Be sure to download it.
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