Ghost house with frozen enemies in there? Great idea! Well, I think there should be some unfrozen enemies in there, but I know, you're still designing the level. Anyways, the only problem is that apostrophe, it looks off and the space for text is wasted that way. You should make a specific tile for the apostrophes if it's possible to do so and put the tiles on the same line as the verses. Tag (spam) was not closed.
Looks great! But I think the water should be a more purplish tone due to it being at sunset.
Also, it'd be a cool touch to make the Spike's balls beach balls instead, because it is a beach level (from what I can see at least)
5-2 looks decent. Last screen looks bland without showing action (I mean, there are coins, so you most likely need to jump over something or something like that) 5-A looks pretty good, especially last screenshot. GJ!
-------------------- It's all like some kind of whack computer game! - Donkey, 2004
this hack seems really interesting. i love the overworld, has a very different feel from others ive seen.. probably cuz its more smb3 styled, but i digress. it looks great. overall this hack seems to have a very interesting flair and atmosphere, while still being traditional enough. honestly cant wait to play the full thing.
Thank you UpB!
Currently, 6-2 is in the making, but right now i'm making a Super Mario Bros. Hack (my first one ever) it shouldn't take too long untill in finished it.
so here's the last level of World 5, this one is not what you'd expect in a mario game.
the Level is called 'Larva Nest' a underground section full of Larvas.
This Level is based on a nightmare i once had, about larva like creatures hanging around the ceiling, Of course they were a lot creepier than here.
this wasn't part of the dream, but i thought a miniboss would be cool.