Overall this hack is weird.
Already, the overworld is not changed or even the names of the levels.
And the levels are not changed.
Finally to come to the only modified level.
It's really not good.
Overall, it's flat and the level design is not very good.
Putting the foreground like this
is really not very pretty that gives what's called a "cut-off
If we modify a little, so that it's correct you should do like this
It's the same here
. There's a cut-off at the end, do like this
to make it correct.
Also, I said previously that it was empty and flat, look if we take this place
It should be made less flat, prettier, like this
, you see the difference?
Finally, put a platform with the goal because in the current case the level is not finishable because there is no platform below the goal, and remember to put this
to indicate the point goal.
You started Lunar Magic recently, everyone at these beginnings.
In order to improve you I advise you to read the FAQ
, read all that conserves the "SMW Hacking"
And to improve your Level Design, I advise you to read this tutorial
I hope I have been helpful and good luck for the future!