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My SMW Hack: - Lost Kingodom - [Vid, SS]

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After my last hack was not to good comparaded to my 1rst one i gave up on hacking for almost 6 months.After that i started again to design levels and OW, learning some custom stuff etc.So now i want to have my hack thread.

Story:One night, Mario had a dream where he saw that the princess got kidnaped again but he didn´t see wo he/she was. Then he heard a voice saying: Go and find the 7 golden emeralds to find the lost kingdom and free the princess, so Mario got up and began to search the 7 golden emeralds that are on 7 pyramids...

Video from one of my levels: "Mushroom Hills"
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I inserted some new GFX and changed the music from that level and added a new status bar.

Now SS:


Old OW...

New OW!

Now some level SS...

1rst level: Flower Gardens

This level is peaceful so it has not too much enemys, this hack goes from easy to hard.

Some springboard jumping... (notice the i block [infoblock])

the end of the level

Now Dolphin Garden ermmm Lake

This level has layer 3 low water and dolphins! so you have to jump from the dolphins.

Now you know why its called dolphin lake

Next Level: Pipe Grounds 1


Moving pipes!

2 paths: up normal one, down: a path that leads you to the key.

The key!

Some random area.

Don´t fall!

The keyhole!

Now the switch palace...

Orange and yellow, do ya like it?

Some munchers bloking the way...

And the coins are yellow, orange too!

The switch! (Notice the color change)

So thats it from now, i need constructive critism and comments.

<_< i dont want to this thread to die so.. bump

I would want to have 2 or 3 beta tester when i finish level world one
I guess I'll beta test although you should probably ask in the hackers for hire thread, to get more people.

You got the job just let me finish world 1 :P
this video i has been already saw...


no, i J/K. i think that as a level you are good, but i have some mistakes to report:



WTF??? the places is good, but you saw in the bottom??????
in top is curve, but bottom... OMG what a thing! is a OW Impressionism
style? fix it immediately D:) you saw the cliff of the castle? is flat: fix it too.



good, is good this, even theinfobox from DW:TLC but the brown block must be correct: it seems flat. give a bit light and shadow.



WTF??? normal SMW graphics with cement block Redrawn by icegoom???
For god's sake, don't use grey cement block redrawn and SMW graphics togheter!! NO! NO! and NO!
or you use redrawn or you use normal graphics. don't mix two kinda graphics x0



well, is cool, but for the BG, use the palette animation if you don't use it.

sorry for these errors, but is ugly a redravn mixed with SMW graphics or a overworld Impressionism style.

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Watch, i made a Super Mario 64 level

Ohhh fffffffff stile clashing DX didn´t think about it (plus, i hate that)
Gotta fix that and i´ve already changed the brown block to something better (I forgot that the brown blocks are outdated D=)
Anyways thanks
I find that your hack has a calm and peaceful feeling to it. There is a lot of colors and I really like that. I find using alot of different graphics togheter like redrawn with originals is cool. I like the redrawn cement block alot more. It looks better and its they get pretty even more when you mess around with their palettes. I find that there is a different feel to your work than in other hacks.
You really have to fix the overworld, its going to be a pretty quick fix anyway. Kaleidoscope backgroup fits the switch palace;).

Try fixing the mushroom in your video that half of it goes behind the hill. Overall nice work!
I'm glad that people actually use my bonus room BG, but I do think the colors are a bit to bright. Maybe darken them?

Yup, that BG is awesome and I already darkened the colors.

Edit: Does it look better? (also notice the brown blocks :P)
No! It hurts the eyes! Try making the entire background a gradient from a dull yellow to a moderate yellow.
Edgar: The new colors look much better. Just be careful with yellow and orange. The colors are still confusing, but they aren't eye-searing. Perhaps you should make some of those ground tiles less complex so they don't compete with the psychedelic background. Just a suggestion though.

Justin Case: for me it doesn´t hurt my eyes... better if I make the BG orange and the FG yellow, what do ya think?
Mission_316:That´s what i want, a pshycodelic switch palace :P

How far in the hack do you plan on putting that level in the video? Those poisonous yellow mushrooms blend into the foreground a little to much.
Originally posted by Dinomar
this video i has been already saw...

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But this hack is looking good.

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Mods, don"t close this if this is a long bump. Its MY hack Thread D:.
Anyways, my hack got freezed because of lazyness but Im working on it now and I have some new SS.

Title Screen :D. Its somewhat bad but i did my best effort D:


New Overwolrd with custom pallletes.


New level: Koopa Grasslands.


Some wall jump action


Some edited Bob omb gfx.

Every world has a hard level but only 5 have a secret!


ExAnimated bullet bill (yeah i know exanimation)



Kinda POW maze


The end from the hard level. (Notice the Changed Status Bar)


Now the Fire Flower New GFX. Now they aren"t yoshi coins they are pyramid coins!

Now a level video.
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I love the art style on your title screen. KEEP IT!!!!

Dinomar is right, the overworld needs changing at the bottom to match the curves at the top (If you get what i mean).

Unless all of those cement blocks are wall jump blocks, it may get confusign to the player having to guess which blocks can be jumped off and which ones can't.

From that one frame, the bob-omb is looking better. I never did like the original SMW style bob-omb.

That bullet bill is looking shiz. (Thats good, btw).

As before, those hand-drawn blocks need shading so they don't look completely flat.

I like the new fire flower, (If not a tiny bit to skinny).

Thanks for the comments Doomdragon. I"m gonna fix some things that u said...
Gotta get SS.
Whats the name of the song for your first video. I heard it but forgot where....

Good Hack so far!
Just back here to browse a bit.

Its from Super Mario Land. Tai or CHai Kingdom.
Thanks, i will ry to put the best effort (except for HDMA xD im to lazy to restart the ROM)

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