That is way more than I need to see. I recommend playing through some kaizo hacks to help understand the basics of kaizo level creation. A lot of the obstacles in this were simply not needed. Glitched graphics and cement are lazy design and won't be accepted. Also make sure you submit to the right category next time. This is not even close to Kaizo:Hard.
Not sure why all of this is here since when you press the silver P switch it all becomes irrelevant . (yellow)
You can't get past this koopa unless you die or go back left since he becomes a coin (green)
Triangle doesn't work correctly.