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Persona Non Grata by bluesaint
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File Name: Persona Non Grata
Submitted: by bluesaint
Authors: bluesaint
Demo: No
Featured: No
Length: 12 exit(s)
Difficulty: Kaizo: Light
Description: A kaizo hack on the intermediate side of kaizo light which tries to be unique and not use the traditional kaizo tricks. If you get stuck then here is a playlist with showcases of the levels: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLp-DdMtvAUWkCUktV9JYMVLmPBDt0PDqW
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The main reason for the rejection of this hack is the very recognizable edits of Super Mario World Choco Fort, Castle 6, Choco Secret and Yoshi Island 2. All levels should be made from scratch. It doesn't help that you just basically forced the smw speedrun strats in this hack.

Apart from that there is a few other things I would recommend fixing.

Cutoff -
This is everwhere in this hack and makes it look hastily thrown together. I'll go over a few examples of this so you can see what I mean. I wont be able to go every single case (I also don't expect you to get every single piece), but the amount needs to be drastically reduced. Some of these may be things you never thought of but are easily caught by someone who plays a decent amount of hacks.

Examples:

Wrong Corner Tiles in the dirt, spacing between pipes

https://imgur.com/mcfaCnO

Logs not capped off

https://imgur.com/d9Hk8eF

Logs cutoff the foreground trees... Consider if having the trees here are worth the cutoff.

https://imgur.com/jV36IkB

Wrong corner tiles for dirt, clouds just end abruptly.

https://imgur.com/1zQVQKs

Overworld has a bunch of stuff that needs to be fixed.

https://imgur.com/uZNAn7W

Mrs.Giz Raceway - I think the green pipes should be changed to something else or shaded in a way that makes it looks like you can pass through them.

Final Level - You can bypass the shell completely in the switch room.


How the levels played themselves were fine no complaints. I think this hack has good ideas and are executed decently and should be easily accepted once you replace the remakes and work on making the hack look a bit nicer.
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