This is very very close to being acceptable, but the ending could be a little bit better. As per the message I sent you on Discord:
"I have some suggestions that could help improve the ending.
Namely, I'd double-check the notes at the end on channel #0 since they sound wrong to me by ear, and then add a bit of a delay before the pitch bend happens on the last note and maybe increase its duration as well."
I'll also add that maybe adding slight pitch envelope could help imitate the original better, although you should probably experiment with that a bit. Don't include it if it doesn't work, of course.
If you touch that up, then this port should be good to go and we can accept it.